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The Power of Subjective Feedback


I had no idea until you showed me,

thinking I was only poppies and a pond like glass,

that I had such brilliant character within me.

Stepping aside, you spoke frankly and without fear

or judgment, giving me only your subjective perspective.

Now, I am more

than flowers,

water

and stone.

I am Mammoth,

Medusa,

and

Jimi Hendrix

Resurrected

Transformed

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Pond at Dawn on July 4th


Four ducks, in simultaneous flip

Pure white bellies upon  dark pond surface

Bottoms up in morning salute

Photo courtesy of Canon Digital Photography Forums

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