I no longer have to share my peach
not even this, large and ripe as a Red Sox baseball
ready to play
leather smooth and fine in my hand
Glowing yellow slips and drips
its plum red core
creamy across my tongue
but the pleasure is somewhat wanting
I should be happy
to have this fruit
all to myself
sitting on my shelf, no longer at risk
of succumbing to other hands
hands that would take it to mouth and bite into flesh
without even thinking of sharing
Those hands would quickly be empty of peach
and full of its satisfaction
while I, complaining, though only in fun
would go and buy another
I never really minded
His pleasure pleased me
as much as the peach
pleased him
Now I have my own peach
carefully pitted and sliced
placed on earthenware inside up
blushing towards the sun
waiting for me to enjoy all by myself, all to myself
with no one to claim the bigger half
~ * ~
Last week’s bowl of ripe Skagit cherries
departed, silent with the season
that I never noticed leaving
The bowl sits on my counter, a barren vessel
If only I’d tasted one more rich orb
before having to wait for next year’s crop
knowing this was the best we’ve ever had
realizing the miracle of ripened fruit
If only I’d enjoyed a little longer
spitting the pits across the garden
one more time
The only thought that hovers now
like an uninvited guest
is that no one is here to share the bowl
or to challenge me, seeing if I could spit the pit
further than him
~ * ~ * ~ *
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Such a lovely way of putting it using the peaches as an example to remind us that happiness can never be fully ours if we seek it in selfishness . Joys shared are indeed joys doubled . So what if you can only have half those slices, sharing it would have made it sweeter still. Pity when the intention is there and our circumstances leave us to partake of the peaches in solitude. Or is that an excuse? We can always find someone to share..the problem is perhaps that we have our biased preferences or concepts about who is worthy of our benefaction.
Wise thoughts from my dear friend who makes the simple pleasure of making mandalas from petals in the garden and shares the moment with a child, teaching her where to find magic and memories.
This is such a lovely poem and peaches are such a way to put our feeling into perspective it is sad that nobody is there to challenge you in the end hope this will change
.http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/
Thank you, Sarah. I made the decision to leave California and come up to the Pacific Northwest where I was headed 10 years ago, but got diverted by a very sweet, wonderful man who I love very much. The time seemed right for me to leave California for many reasons, and I’m really glad I made the move, but I sure do miss him at times. He’s coming up to live here in 2 years when he retires – that’s the plan anyway. You know what happens to plans though – sometimes they work out and sometimes they surprise you with something else. I’m so glad you popped in to enjoy my poem. By visiting your site, I got a FAB recipe for tonight’s supper!!
waiting for next season, sweet fruits and lovely humors,
you bet.
glad to see you share.
There’s always next season to look forward to, but even better is the enjoyment of Now. The sentiments of feeling a little lonely can also have their own sweetness, when the feelings are used as creative fuel. Thanks for dropping by! I really like the long list of poetry prompt places on your site – good work!
you made me drool with your write haha! i want my peach! my gooseberry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/16/helpless/
Typical male, I write about my peach and already you’ve got your fingers on it!
Glad you enjoyed the sharing, fiveloaf. Thanks for your visit.
The regret and lonliness is palpable in this peach of a poem. I could see the missing of a loved one right away, but thought perhaps he had passed on. I’m so glad to hear he may one day again be sharing peaches and cherries with you!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
Palpable – thank you! Missing him, yes, but no regrets, thankfully, as we communicate daily and look forward to long weekend visits. Thanks so much for visiting my site and your emapthic comments.
Oh my dear, dear poet of love and loss and all good things that matter…sometimes I feel your poems are mirror images of some of my own. I think you know what I mean. I write of food and relationship and temporality, too, but you do it with this flow that just brings me to tears.
I feel the same way when I read your poetry. Each of us mirror life when we take time to observe the moments of discomfort and honor those moments by recognizing them – out loud. When we do so, it allows that particular form of energy to flow, and as you know, all movement is fascinating because it leads us somewhere. And basically, we are all travellers looking for a destination. Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement.