When I entered your space
you stood in the corner
Your dark dove eye
sought my gaze and waited
not knowing if I had come
to comfort or hurt
though I had the power for either
You, expecting nothing
except perhaps that I might
reach out to touch you
but I didn’t
I squatted inside the stable door
drew your eyes to my body by gazing
at your shoulders and back
waiting until you
came to me
curious and open
You smelled my hair, snorted
massaged my scalp
velvet lips and the whiskered
soft pad of your chin
all the while me wondering
if you’d challenge
this strange invader
with your teeth
but you didn’t
I rose to my height
nestled my shoulder
into your neck
deep as an overstuffed chair
and my cheek against your mane
crisp heavy sharp-strands
You nuzzled my back
Then, and only then
I touched you
My palm smoothed
by the grain of your neck
human skin met silken hide
sliding down the iron-grey
slipping across warm wrinkles
that gathered at the meeting
of breast and shoulder
soft like a puppy’s muzzle
My skin craved more
You stood, listening
my hands traveled
the continents of your withers,
back, sides and belly
wide like a baby whale
twitching when invaded by fly
stilled for my exploring hands
yet not ignoring
your senses never sleep
Fingers rounded the curve of your leg
sliding down, smooth glide
I found the velvet vessel
feeding forearm to frog
pulsing and soft
under tendon and flesh
hidden in the groove
between bones
splint and cannon
You shifted, passed your weight
to the other locked leg
lifted one tidy hoof
into my hand
Planting your head
on the bend of my back
you exhaled across my bottom
hay-sweetened breath
our introduction
complete

Beautiful!
Thanks Neva. She was…
Very touching
Thanks, Magda. She meant so much to me, I really struggled with writer’s judgment as I wrote this, thinking it has to be perfect. Reading it again today, I realised that I missed the mark – tried too hard and lost my voice in the struggle. I think I have to scrap this one and start all over – keep it simple and direct – just like Wiggy was. Ah well, writing is after all, a process. Blessed be that darned process.
stunning!
Thanks, Jingle.
This gave me goosebumps… It was lovely, Cindy!! The details were fabulously done!
“twitching when invaded by fly” — I really loved this bit…
Among animals, I adore horses… According to Chinese Astrology, I am a Horse sign… and that makes me happier than ever!!! I think they the MOST graceful creatures ever!
An excellent tribute to this friend, Cindy… Bravo!!!
My daughter is a horse sign as well; that’s interesting because there have been many times when reading your work, I felt that your energy reminded me of her. Sounds like the Chinese knew a thing or two.
Thanks for the comments – always so welcome
This truly touched my heart. Well done.
That’s the magic – the touching – straight to the heart – that’s what she had; thanks so much for your comment
Your love and understanding of horses is in every line. This makes me miss my horse, Gypsy, very very much…
Awh, Talon, I’m so sorry!! I’m sure you and your Gypsy had a lovely times togther. Lucky you for having that relationship – and for Gypsy. Thanks for your comment
Reading this was a magical few minutes. Very well told.
Pearl
Thank you, Pearl. The magic is the important part – we can all hold onto that.
reminded me a bit of the horse whisperer when reading your poem..
how well you describe the feelings – the gaining of trust – the allowance to go ahead – the interaction – the texture of touch
i have to turn around to make sure there’s not a horse standing right behind me, blowing his warm breath on my neck..
thank you, Claudia. such kind words from a beautiful writer
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if you wish to contribute this week, let me know.
your talent is highly appreciated by me and by fellow poets…
hope to see you in soon.
Happy Friday!
i wish i had a horse,simply amazing…
You don’t need to have a horse, as I managed to discover. People who own horses are always glad to receive help. This was how I became familiar with horses. For 6 years, I groomed, mucked out, fed, and exercised other people’s horses – all the while learning from them how to take care of a horse. It was a wonderful time of my life and I learned so much from those magical animals. After my “volunteer” training, I finally managed to get my own horse – she was 2 years old and only just learning how to carry a rider and do the things horses and riders do. I had her for a year and a half. I trained her to jump and do gates, and stand while I picked berries from the hedges, and she was an amazing, wonderful friend. Finally I had to sell her, for she reached a point where she was ready to do lots of fun pony-games and competitions and I wasn’t. I found a perfect owner for her so my horse and this girl went on to win many competitions together and to grow up together. I feel so blessed to have had this experience, those years of horse and pony filled me with something I will never lose. One day I hope to have another horse, but the next one will be retired and I will just take good care of it in its old age and give it back some of the pleasure that horses have given me.